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A strange, new enemy attacks, and Kaitan learns he may have to deal with ghosts of his past.

I didn't have very many problems with this one. At first, the battle scene felt a little rushed, but since it took up half the chapter, probably not. Remember, this story's going to go on for a few chapters, so don't expect it to end any time soon. Other than that, I think this is a pretty good chapter.

Chapter 3
Chapter 4 (you are here)
Chapter 5
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Awesome, the battle was intense and I'm loving how a plaque from the past is back